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Demi Idle
is 5% done
And I alredy can't stand it.
The prose is full of cheesy lines and cliches. Weird use of language and strange similes don't help either. The dialogues and situations seem contrived, because the whole thing is so culturally alien to me I cannot suspend disbelief.
"He was a pretty specimen of big man meat."
Kill me now.
— Apr 08, 2018 03:59AM
The prose is full of cheesy lines and cliches. Weird use of language and strange similes don't help either. The dialogues and situations seem contrived, because the whole thing is so culturally alien to me I cannot suspend disbelief.
"He was a pretty specimen of big man meat."
Kill me now.
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