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The tone of the author in my book is reflective. He is telling a story about him self and he obviously didn’t do everything perfectly so he tells what he did while saying what he thought about his decisions. The tone is also direct because he is just saying exactly what happened and what his reaction to it was. They also might be sentimental because it is a biography so they try and make them self look good.

If there was advice I could give to my character it would be to keep trying in school even when things were hard early on. Also, to keep trying to make yourself better and stronger. So that would mean to do off ice conditioning and do extra shooting at home and skate more to get better at that too. This would help with being more independent later on and wanting to better your self on your own, being a better player.

The structure of my book is in chronological order of their life story. This a a biography that starts with early days and ends with overtime. There is a similar theme that you just have to keep working and trying through the book though. It doesn’t just say the good things that happen but it tells all the ups and downs and how they keep pushing on to strive to succeed.