Elithanathile’s Reviews > Livingston > Status Update

// Livingstone is calling his client "baby" now?!!? They barely spoke ANY words to one another and ... listen, am I being Punk'd?!!? I'm being Punk'd, right?!!? I thought that show was cancelled, but whatever!! It's either that or I'm sleep-reading and don't recall a MASSIVE chunk of what must have happened to get us to this point between these two!!

More importantly, HOOOW did this book get so many high ratings??!!

// If this is how this author writes, I'm going to be done before we begin!! Blech! Not my thing, NOT my thing AT ALL!! In fact, I'm only 19% in and I'm already aggravated >:-o!!!! This is NOT the way you write a book ... in fact, I don't think this is how you show how NOT to write a book! You can't fucking understand anything that's happening here because everything is all over the fucking place!! It makes NO sense!

Wait, wait, wait, WHAT?!!?

1. How the fuck is Fielding "coming to love" where he's been staying when NOTHING FUCKING HAPPENED YET?!!? Am I missing pages, POVs, and chapters here, or what?!!?

2. Who the hell does Liv think he is, bossing his "boy" around like the Dom that he apparently is, when NOTHING has even happened between these two yet, and by nothing, I mean NOTHING; zilch, zip, nada!!

This book is WIERD!!!

1. Why on earth does Fielding read like a 10 yr old boy & not the supremely shy 23 yr old that he is!?

2. Who are all these established couples & why wasn't I told that reading a couple of the other series would help me get a better grasp of who's who!?

3. Since #2 escaped my attn, I'll assume it wasn't pertinent info! Why then do I feel like I was dropped into the middle of a running story?! WTF is going on here?!