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Well I did like Jake, and already bought this anyway -- let's see if this improves on the first.
— Apr 20, 2018 02:05PM
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Beth
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I knew I liked Jake.
Internal monologues:
**In some logical, rational part of himself, his brain tried to explain to his primitive animal side that nobody had to die just because ....**
**His primitive side wasn't buying it.**
**.... What the nine hells was that about? Would he beat his chest like an ape next?**
— Apr 20, 2018 03:01PM
Internal monologues:
**In some logical, rational part of himself, his brain tried to explain to his primitive animal side that nobody had to die just because ....**
**His primitive side wasn't buying it.**
**.... What the nine hells was that about? Would he beat his chest like an ape next?**
Beth
is 48% done
Ok -- her reaction to the dick measuring contest was appropriate. Plus at least Jake knows for sure how she feels in regards to the bigots -- so we don't have to hear THAT internal monologue.
— Apr 20, 2018 02:52PM
Beth
is 33% done
Well hopefully the goofball persona vs. all people are untrustworthy crud is explained soon? It's weird -- the dichotomy between his internal & external dialogue.
Unlike that split personality guy on the 7 -- that made sense. So far Jake isn't.
— Apr 20, 2018 02:37PM
Unlike that split personality guy on the 7 -- that made sense. So far Jake isn't.
Beth
is 24% done
True -- clichés are clichés for a reason.
Not too thrilled with the gadabout female lead -- but at least she had scruples.
— Apr 20, 2018 02:21PM
Not too thrilled with the gadabout female lead -- but at least she had scruples.

