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Jory
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So far, the jumping back and forth between time periods is not only jarring, but it feels like a gimmicky way to force suspense. I usually like multiple time periods, but maybe the difference is that in her other books, there are different protagonists for each time period but their respective timelines are linear. This just feels like she wrote the book then shuffled the chapters around for no reason.
Apr 26, 2018 12:37PM
Cocoa Beach

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