MzBond’s Reviews > Origins > Status Update
MzBond
is 70% done
Liking the premise and direction of the story so far but there are some inconsistencies in the writing. There is at least one timeline mismatch and just now the writing went inexplicably from 3rd person to 1st. I think some better editing is needed here.
— May 11, 2018 02:58PM
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