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vacatedboat
is 81% done
I’m not really feeling the need for closure on this one; I just don’t care how it ends because I am absolutely not feeling any emotional or physical chemistry here. At 81% completion, this is not a good sign...
— May 16, 2018 07:46PM
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vacatedboat
is 40% done
At almost halfway through, there is no sense of chemistry between the two mains. I don’t even get a sense that they like each other all that much and I don’t particularly like either one of them, either. The next 60% is going to be a bumpy ride for me, but I’ve DNF’d too many books lately to give up now. Grammatically, this isn’t horrible, but it reads like a diary in a way...a lot of tell, little show.
— May 15, 2018 07:19AM
