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Chris B.
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Struggling with this one. The Korean mythology and culture is very interesting, but the writing isn't clicking with me. What I'm being shown is a teenage girl facing crazy, spooky stuff with all the excitement of watching paint dry, but then I'm told that she was really scared. Could have fooled me. I think the writing could use a bit more punch. Less tell, more show.
— Jun 07, 2018 12:02PM
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Chris B.
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Okay, so a mythological demigod is after me. My life is in certain danger. So...I'm going to sneak out alone to go to a party with my friends. Because, reasons. Don't ask me why.
— Jun 08, 2018 06:26AM
