Arianna’s Reviews > The Improbable Wonders of Moojie Littleman > Status Update
Arianna
is on page 22 of 294
The writing style is a bit confusing. The very beginning of it was super hard to follow. Was he in the orphanage and no one wanted to adopt him for long? Because it made it sound like he was, but then it made it sound like he wasn't! It also made it sound like he was performing magic, but wasn't clear about it like it should have been. Then there was mention of "Hostile" like it was another race but no explanation...
— Jun 23, 2018 04:23PM
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Arianna
is on page 113 of 294
"They walked toward the woods, squinting at the sun, he and she walking"... I'm really wondering if anyone even bothered to edit this book? I want to like the story, but the way it's written leaves a lot to be desired...
— Jun 25, 2018 06:15PM
Arianna
is on page 58 of 294
This books remains a bit confusing to follow, due to the use of far too many analogies to describe even mundane things. Like it's trying too hard to sound romantic. The conversations are odd also. It's still interesting story-wise, so far anyway.
— Jun 24, 2018 03:31PM
