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Emily
Emily is 7% done
I think it's clear that this is this author's first work. I don't hate it, but it does definitely feel very rookie
tropes are so far a bit clunky, motivations a bit stiff, and exposition poorly placed
also raCIST?? already quite a bit yikes though i'm hoping (perhaps naively) that that gets complicated down the line?
Jun 24, 2018 11:25AM
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Emily
Emily is 95% done
it really is just the first act of a book not the first book of a trilogy
Jun 27, 2018 01:49PM
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Emily
Emily is 81% done
i'm not even done with this book but i can tell that (if properly edited) this trilogy could have (should have?) been one book instead of three
Jun 27, 2018 11:25AM
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Emily
Emily is 72% done
Tesca is the Iron Fist of the Frees and I hate it
that duel was... bad
Jun 26, 2018 10:21PM
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Emily
Emily is 67% done
I REALIZED another thing that is bothering me that I can now articulate: everyone is forthcoming. even this assassin is mouthy to kayrla when he's trying to do his thing and then grievous (naming yikes) is giving himself away to tesca
also meagher must be familiar with brandon sanderson because i keep wanting to call kayrla "vin"
Jun 26, 2018 06:52PM
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Emily
Emily is 51% done
Jun 25, 2018 06:50PM
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Emily
Emily is 44% done
i think maybe another of these rookie signifiers is a show/tell issue? something about the thought-processes/feelings of these characters is a bit grating
Jun 25, 2018 05:58PM
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Emily
Emily is 35% done
if i have to hear "those black bastards" one more time i'm gonna flip
Jun 25, 2018 04:26PM
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Emily
Emily is 26% done
I like the idea of scrapper's honor motivation but I wish it was written about earlier/better?
Jun 25, 2018 12:15PM
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Emily
Emily is 16% done
I dunno it still feels very beginner but Kayrla needing money from Teska seems like a solid motivation to stay
Still pretty racist but I do love the Argument and the Retort that's very good
Jun 25, 2018 06:30AM
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