Becky’s Reviews > Death and Relaxation > Status Update

This story very entertaining. HOWEVER. I'm a little annoyed with the really obvious stuff the MC is missing. She's a cop. She notices that a character moves like a cop, but she never wonders why. Something mystical and funky happens with her ex, and she brushes it off. Someone swears an oath that they didn't commit the murder, but she doesn't notice that they were careful not to mention if they knew who did.