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Charles
is 50% done
Second and third stories are better written. Though I do come away with the sense that s/he is fulfilling a writing class assignment for stories in different styles. Nonetheless, the second story is an intriguing internet chat room interview.
— Jul 16, 2018 04:04AM
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Charles
is 51% done
The third story starts out with a sexist flaw that people who grew up watching Barbara Eden on television shouldn’t have. It generally feels like a concept piece before the actual story is written. But I liked it.
— Jul 16, 2018 04:04AM
Charles
is 50% done
Second and third stories are better written. Though I do come away with the sense that s/he is fulfilling a writing class assignment for stories in different styles. Nonetheless, the second story is an intriguing internet chat room interview.
— Jul 16, 2018 04:04AM
Charles
is 20% done
Finished the first story. His writing style makes me think English is not his first language. The word choice is often labored. And for the entree story, the plot was tired.
But it was not painful, so I will continue.
— Jul 15, 2018 08:49PM
But it was not painful, so I will continue.
