John Hanson’s Reviews > The New Twenty > Status Update

Attended Tony's workshop last week. It was a fantastic day, and I learned important elements of story writing. I disagreed with a few things though, such as the need for only five edits. I found an error right away on the first page:

-The story is written in present tense, yet a narrator's line reads, At that precise point in time, Jack is wondering … At that precise point in time is past tense.