Taylor Yardley’s Reviews > Meddling Kids > Status Update

Having some conflicting thoughts about the author’s grammar choices. There are some passages that completely break the flow because of some odd sentence structure or unexpected turn of phrase. I end up having to think too hard about what he’s trying to say and losing momentum.

With that said, I appreciate the nod to nostalgia without force-feeding the references to the reader (I’m looking at you, Ready Player One).