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Niumi
is 45% done
I really dislike reading about a poor faithful woman pinning after a man who will never love her because the mc is such a mary sue and is the one who kindles the man loins. Like why put Marissa in there just to have her woe after warth who will never have her? And she has no respect for herself, staying and pinning after someone who makes her feel like shes dirty and they are disgusted by her.
— Aug 05, 2018 09:17PM
Niumi
is 40% done
Why do they have the cops POV... there's too many and not much happens on them. Beth's PoV is the most interesting one
— Aug 04, 2018 07:29PM

