Avid’s Reviews > Luck of the Irish > Status Update
Avid
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then we see Kiera get off the plane in Ireland. there's no page break or section break. it's just a new paragraph as if it were the same scene. is this a kindle formatting issue?
— Aug 09, 2018 07:57PM
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Avid
is on page 77
you're the best thing that's ever happened to me. uh, what? literally zero support for this.
— Aug 09, 2018 11:27PM
Avid
is on page 59
oh, come on! what woman doesn't want to say, "I SAW YOU, you cheating jerk!"??
— Aug 09, 2018 11:06PM
Avid
is on page 54
too afraid to read a text msg? and of course she sees the totally platonic kiss. so contrived.
— Aug 09, 2018 10:57PM
Avid
is on page 52
what woman kisses an ex-boyfriend on the lips and calls it platonic?? CHEEKS are platonic. Lips are definitely not.
— Aug 09, 2018 10:56PM
Avid
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weird beginning. it's a book about Kiera but we're first introduced to her parents, as if the story is about them.
— Aug 09, 2018 07:56PM
