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Avid
Avid is 5% done
painful editing errors. stilted "See Jane run" narration.
Aug 09, 2018 08:26PM
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Avid
Avid is on page 77
you're the best thing that's ever happened to me. uh, what? literally zero support for this.
Aug 09, 2018 11:27PM
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Avid
Avid is on page 59
oh, come on! what woman doesn't want to say, "I SAW YOU, you cheating jerk!"??
Aug 09, 2018 11:06PM
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Avid
Avid is on page 57
There are at least THIRTY (30) WINKS in this novel.
Aug 09, 2018 11:03PM
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Avid
Avid is on page 56
lots of winking going on in this novel.
Aug 09, 2018 10:59PM
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Avid
Avid is on page 54
too afraid to read a text msg? and of course she sees the totally platonic kiss. so contrived.
Aug 09, 2018 10:57PM
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Avid
Avid is on page 52
what woman kisses an ex-boyfriend on the lips and calls it platonic?? CHEEKS are platonic. Lips are definitely not.
Aug 09, 2018 10:56PM
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Avid
Avid is on page 31
page 31 and the "electric touch" cliche. UGH
Aug 09, 2018 10:17PM
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Avid
Avid is on page 5
then we see Kiera get off the plane in Ireland. there's no page break or section break. it's just a new paragraph as if it were the same scene. is this a kindle formatting issue?
Aug 09, 2018 07:57PM
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Avid
Avid is starting
weird beginning. it's a book about Kiera but we're first introduced to her parents, as if the story is about them.
Aug 09, 2018 07:56PM
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