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And cue the Cave of Wonders

How does Evie already """""understand"""" everything before it's even spoken???????

And cue the Cave of Wonders

And now we're meandering to the son?

I don't even see the point of Jim being in this scene. Also this is definitely too fairytale, straight from "Tangled"

I don't even see the point of Jim being in this scene. Also this is definitely too fairytale, straight from "Tangled"

Playing classical music immensely helps build the atmosphere, but the easy outs the author takes– mainly telling and not showing through selective POV– remains a weak point