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And cue the Cave of Wonders
Aug 03, 2022 07:15PM
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Emily
Emily is on page 229 of 345
How does Evie already """""understand"""" everything before it's even spoken???????
Aug 26, 2018 11:55PM
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Emily
Emily is on page 198 of 345
And cue the Cave of Wonders
Aug 26, 2018 06:30PM
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Emily
Emily is on page 181 of 345
And now we're meandering to the son?
Aug 26, 2018 01:31PM
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Emily
Emily is on page 181 of 345
And now we're meandering to the son?
Aug 26, 2018 01:31PM
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Emily
Emily is on page 168 of 345
I don't even see the point of Jim being in this scene. Also this is definitely too fairytale, straight from "Tangled"
Aug 26, 2018 01:15PM
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Emily
Emily is on page 168 of 345
I don't even see the point of Jim being in this scene. Also this is definitely too fairytale, straight from "Tangled"
Aug 26, 2018 01:15PM
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Emily
Emily is on page 160 of 345
Playing classical music immensely helps build the atmosphere, but the easy outs the author takes– mainly telling and not showing through selective POV– remains a weak point
Aug 26, 2018 01:09PM
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