S. Rutherford’s Reviews > The Demon in Me > Status Update
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Um... it's a good idea but wtf?! Amateur writing. Page 4 and I've already run into adverbs that NEED to be removed. The author also TELLS descriptions, not shows. Ughn! And its okay if the chief can be a dick to her simply because he's sex-on-legs? Wtf? Fuck, I hope this sad writing doesn't carry throughout the whole book.
— Aug 30, 2018 12:18PM
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