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I'm feeling this kid's pain, and honestly, the fact that he's a kid in pain pisses me the fuck off. Screw all of y'all. I react to pain with RAAAAAGE.

Putting the worthiness of this MCs story aside, I'm having IMMENSE trouble with the author's "voice".

It's pretentious, supercilious, and otherwise overly 'flowery'.

It's a book, not a 19th century gothic poem.
Sep 04, 2018 12:41AM
In This Iron Ground (Natural Magic #1)

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