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Emily W.
is 72% done
All the story seems to have is weird spurts of drama for its conflict, mean tweets that could totally be ignored since the tweets aren't even good at harassment or bullying.
And why do some scenes just randomly happen then jump into some other scene without some kind of transition.
— Sep 10, 2018 06:42AM
And why do some scenes just randomly happen then jump into some other scene without some kind of transition.
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Emily W.
is 53% done
So the insta-frienship has some development. But some conflicts in the story don't last long since some of the conflicts aren't strong enough to keep the story motivated for what Clementine wants to do.
And even with as ridiculous as this story is...I think it knows how to keep me drawn in.
— Sep 08, 2018 01:42PM
And even with as ridiculous as this story is...I think it knows how to keep me drawn in.
Emily W.
is 9% done
There is some insta-friendships.
I mean it would take just a little more than the first encounter with someone to decide to be these really good friends.
But that's just me. I suppose maybe Clementine is more extrovert than I'll ever be.
— Aug 08, 2018 04:33PM
I mean it would take just a little more than the first encounter with someone to decide to be these really good friends.
But that's just me. I suppose maybe Clementine is more extrovert than I'll ever be.
