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Elie
is on page 154 of 767
Please stop with the terrible similes. "The sun seem to grow hotter and the mists finally retreated, vanishing like water evaporating on a warming pan. The sunlight hit her like a wave and Vin turned, watching the mists go, their death like an echoing scream." And that's all in the same paragraph! That's not to mention loads of comma splices. WHO IS THIS MAN'S EDITOR?
— Sep 11, 2018 08:54PM
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Elie
is on page 602 of 767
"Vin flipped her hand up and downed the vial of metals..."
Whyyyy.
— Oct 10, 2018 05:48PM
Whyyyy.
Elie
is on page 597 of 767
"Elend shrugged. 'He's a paraplegic. What's the going to do? Bite us?"'
Um, excuse me? First sexism, now ableism. There won't be racism because everybody is white in Sanderson's word, koloss excluded.
— Oct 10, 2018 05:39PM
Um, excuse me? First sexism, now ableism. There won't be racism because everybody is white in Sanderson's word, koloss excluded.
Elie
is on page 465 of 767
"Vin immediately downed her last vial of metals."
Also, Allrianne and Beldre are in the same room for the first time, and Allrianne immediate hates her. For no reason. This also highlights how infrequently women are in the same room, let alone speaking to each other.
— Oct 06, 2018 07:56PM
Also, Allrianne and Beldre are in the same room for the first time, and Allrianne immediate hates her. For no reason. This also highlights how infrequently women are in the same room, let alone speaking to each other.
Elie
is on page 343 of 767
And you thought we were done. Hah. "Vin downed another vial to replenish her steel."
— Sep 24, 2018 08:42PM
Elie
is on page 340 of 767
"She downed one of these as she scrambled across the deck of the rowboat." Sigh.
— Sep 24, 2018 08:35PM
Elie
is on page 144 of 767
Actual quote: "Stars blazed in the sky above him like a million tiny suns." Boy have I got news for you, Mr. Sanderson. Stars ARE suns! And suns are also stars!
— Sep 11, 2018 08:21PM
Elie
is on page 46 of 767
I'm going to document every time someone "downs" liquid. Page 46, "She pulled out a small vial of liquid...and downed it in a single gulp..."
Here we go, friends!
— Sep 09, 2018 03:38PM
Here we go, friends!
