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Andreea
Andreea is 21% done
there is no proper transition between first person and third person narration and that makes it hard to read...
Sep 13, 2018 10:59PM
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Andreea
Andreea is 56% done
Sep 14, 2018 02:42AM
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Andreea
Andreea is 40% done
I really like the fairies and the story, a bit predictable and cliche but I don't mind. What bugs me is the third and first person thing!
Sep 14, 2018 12:27AM
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Andreea
Andreea is 8% done
Only two chapters in, but I am already intrigued and captivated!
Sep 11, 2018 01:23AM
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