Lagaertha’s Reviews > Scars > Status Update

I did not finish.... I could not get in to the MCs, there was too much annoying descriptions going on. I have a hard time reading a steamy scene, where names are mentioned in every sentence. That certainly can be written more elegant....last time was an E.M Denning story, what he something..... 😐It just doesn’t work!!!

The plot, the outline, and the premise is very promising. I paid for it🙄