Pup Loki’s Reviews > A Mage's Power > Status Update
Pup Loki
is 56% done
So over half way through and I don't really like the characters, the world feels cobbled together, and the plots been pretty meh. This is a world full of magic and yet the masters seem rather useless. I want to like the story, I plan to finish it, but....
— Oct 09, 2018 01:27AM
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Pup Loki
is 86% done
Not sure why anyone would be afraid of
the inquisition. They are kind of useless with no back bone what so ever, but then again, the guild is pretty useless as well.
— Oct 28, 2018 11:30PM
the inquisition. They are kind of useless with no back bone what so ever, but then again, the guild is pretty useless as well.
Pup Loki
is 58% done
Quick way to get me growling, drag out "the needs of the many" to justify an action especially during an all bad scene, and on the heels of a characters revelation of self deprecation. Took a break from this book and came back and already thinking of taking another break.
— Oct 16, 2018 11:33PM
Pup Loki
is 40% done
Hey I just met you, and this is crazy, but let's magically bond all over each other because we had one night of sex.
— Sep 30, 2018 01:23AM
Pup Loki
is 7% done
Interesting so far, confused by the world but only on the second chapter so.... pbbttt.
— Sep 23, 2018 01:47AM

