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Paula
is 19% done
I can’t finish this. I don’t think the author researched anything before writing the book, I think he skimmed Clan of the Cave Bear and then got high.
— Oct 12, 2018 11:56PM
Paula
is 19% done
The plot bogged down, the jarring misuse of language piled up, and based on the lack of attention to detail I don’t trust that the author did any research. I’m done.
— Oct 12, 2018 11:49PM
Paula
is 14% done
Well, the plot seems to move along well, but he uses some jarringly anachronistic turns of phrase, is a bit sloppy about plants, and... if he uses the word “prong” for one more thing, I may spurt... and not in a good way.
— Oct 11, 2018 05:37AM

