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The sex happens too quickly. There wasn’t a chance to develop any passion and attraction between the two MCs.
— Oct 19, 2018 02:40PM
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Essie
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Darren leaving didn’t make sense other than for the benefit of the story, to create drama.
— Oct 19, 2018 02:41PM
