Status Updates From Winter Freeze (Rags and Ric...

Darren leaving didn’t make sense other than for the benefit of the story, to create drama.

The sex happens too quickly. There wasn’t a chance to develop any passion and attraction between the two MCs.

Hmm, kinda annoyed about the homeless guy, Darren, being so noble and upright. Be better if he did have some sort of struggle with one of those problems the cop, Andy, judges, such as addiction, b&e, or prostitution. I mean, would Andy be so compassionate if Darren didn't meet his expectations of noble street person? Still, fab H/c one-two punches, so I'm gonna keep reading, see how it dvlps.

Darren is already breaking my heart.

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