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Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
is 49% done
I'm struggling with this one and have been steadily losing interest. It's not that it's poorly written, I just don't get the MC. Eventually there's going to be a romance, I think? But if it's with who I think it's with, boy it there no buildup at all so far except some really weird and out-of-nowhere lusting. And the humor is not working. I feel like the story can't make up its mind what it wants to be.
— Oct 20, 2018 10:47AM
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Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
is 91% done
Why
won't
you
END?
Why am I torturing myself?
— Oct 24, 2018 03:24PM
won't
you
END?
Why am I torturing myself?
Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
is 71% done
You're a cop and you're telling someone to disturb a crime scene. Oy. Not that this surprisesite me from him.
— Oct 23, 2018 09:01AM
Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
is 57% done
Expectations are adjusted. I'm going back in. So far, so good.
Sidenote: The "X minutes left in chapter" is pretty useless when it's not even accurate. I've had two minutes left in this chapter for the last 10 minutes. 🙄
— Oct 21, 2018 07:22PM
Sidenote: The "X minutes left in chapter" is pretty useless when it's not even accurate. I've had two minutes left in this chapter for the last 10 minutes. 🙄
Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
is 33% done
"Tom was there as promised, cradling a beer with his feet up on the footstool."
You know I'm picturing him holding the beer with his feet, right? 😉
— Oct 17, 2018 12:16PM
You know I'm picturing him holding the beer with his feet, right? 😉