Carey’s Reviews > Christmas Outing > Status Update
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is 75% done
Oof the editing. Wrong hair color/characteristics on one of the MC’s. At one point the tense strangely changed to active for a couple pages. The MC has 2 younger brothers, no wait - he’s the youngest- no wait - the brothers are younger again. Yikes.
— Oct 22, 2018 12:30PM
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