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Laurence R.
Laurence R. is 59% done
Hmm... the second short story was cute in a “Meh” way. I didn’t feel the characters’ emotions, I only learned about them through their own words. The writing is more telling than showing, which I’m not a fan of.
Oct 30, 2018 07:14PM
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Laurence R.
Laurence R. is 31% done
My cheesy self absolutely LOVED Kasie West’s short story! If she ever writes an entire YA Christmas novel, I think I would probably be the happiest girl on Earth.
Oct 30, 2018 04:54PM
Snow in Love


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