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S. Rutherford
is on page 204 of 287
All believability for this book flew out the door. Yes its 2005 so AOL is still around. But AOL is Hacker Paradise. There's no fucking way anyone in the Feds, or in the private sector, will use an AOL email for secure information. That is extremely stupid and the first mark of failure.
— Oct 31, 2018 09:46AM
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S. Rutherford
is on page 174 of 287
Okay now I really know the author didn't do research to make this story believable. Lacey is working for the FBI. She is going into a top secret assignment with an agent. I get her stupidity and lack of secrecy when discussing the case loud in public (rookie move), but to wonder why a gun would be needed? Wtf? Clearly, she's dumber than I gave her credit for if she thinks an assignment for the FBI won't involve guns
— Oct 30, 2018 06:32PM
S. Rutherford
is on page 168 of 287
That excellent writing cooled down a lot. Almost as if the author knew the hook that drew in the reader has long since passed, so it was no longer necessary to keep up. Shoddy work, in my opinion. Also found another typo: pg168, "desert" should have TWO "s" to be a meal. Desert is a land of sand. Dessert is decadent food after dinner.
There seems to be an overuse of "wet panties", too. Not sure I believe it much.
— Oct 30, 2018 06:04PM
There seems to be an overuse of "wet panties", too. Not sure I believe it much.
S. Rutherford
is on page 116 of 287
Excellent story, and amazing writing. I ran into 2 typos so far. The spelling changed when she was first naming the bad guy, and at the end of pg115 "stared" should probably be "started". But other than that, the writing is fantastic and the story is great. I'm not too knowledgeable on FBI facts so I don't know how much truth is in it, but it's turning out to be a hot read. Great sex, too.
— Oct 26, 2018 06:25PM