Doina Condrea’s Reviews > Last Chance Motel > Status Update
Doina Condrea
is 39% done
The way I get both perspectives all at once is really weird. Like “Mike wanted to say...but thought it was corny.” and then Eva thinks it would be corny but romantic and she’s disappointed he didn’t say whatever.
It’s just all in the same paragraph and the same chapter one after another and it’s kind of distracting? I’m used to the chapters for Him and Her being separated. Otherwise I enjoy the story.
— Nov 15, 2018 11:42AM
It’s just all in the same paragraph and the same chapter one after another and it’s kind of distracting? I’m used to the chapters for Him and Her being separated. Otherwise I enjoy the story.
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Doina Condrea
is 39% done
The way I get both perspectives all at once is really weird. Like “Mike wanted to say...but thought it was corny.” and then Eva thinks it would be corny but romantic and she’s disappointed he didn’t say whatever.
It’s just all in the same paragraph and the same chapter one after another and it’s kind of distracting? I’m used to the chapters for Him and Her being separated. Otherwise I enjoy the story.
— Nov 15, 2018 11:42AM
It’s just all in the same paragraph and the same chapter one after another and it’s kind of distracting? I’m used to the chapters for Him and Her being separated. Otherwise I enjoy the story.
