Iretsia’s Reviews > Nemesis > Status Update
Iretsia
is 44% done
Idk whether I had a mood swing or the writing suddenly got worse, but I really don't like this writing/narration anymore.
— Dec 04, 2018 07:31AM
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Iretsia
is 86% done
I just want this to be over, but I don't want to dnf after making it this far.
— Dec 04, 2018 12:01PM
Iretsia
is 49% done
I'm almost exactly halfway into this book, but I don't understand this fantasy world at all, I don't feel any connection to the MC, and we've only had one scene between her and the harem in this alleged RH book.
— Dec 04, 2018 07:54AM
Iretsia
is 31% done
Odd contrast between the word choices in the dialogue and narration
— Dec 03, 2018 12:58PM
Iretsia
is 16% done
It's still early, but we're already getting beautiful, almost literary, sentences: "After a lifetime with her and a decade apart from her, he had yet to understand her."
— Nov 30, 2018 02:43PM
Iretsia
is 13% done
Loving this so far. I don't think I've ever seen a second-chance RH before, but this is like a second-chance Four Psychos.
— Nov 30, 2018 02:34PM
Iretsia
is 5% done
This has an almost Lemony Snicket vibe: "A girl without a past meets a boy who promises her a future. They do not live happily ever after."
— Nov 30, 2018 02:11PM
