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is 38% done
So far, not bad, although this story starts out really slow. There's also a lot of descriptions I'm starting to skim over or skip entirely, it's a bit too much in spots. I like Anna, although I'm not fond of her father at this point.
— Dec 10, 2018 05:44PM
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I'm literally forcing myself to read it now. There is too much detail in it, like how Anna is always dressing, and lots of descriptions about wine and food. Raphel feels flat. All Anna and Andrew have done is either argue or skirt around the real issues. Where was the editor? It feels like there wasn't even a beta reader for this one. It's not going anywhere at this point. Lots of passive areas and repetition!
— Dec 15, 2018 08:01AM
