Olivia’s Reviews > Murder by the Book > Status Update

Ok, so I'm only a little way into this book but it's amateur. Now, that's OK - we all have to start somewhere - but it's bordering on becoming totally annoying.There's word repetition - the use of the same or almost the same word(s) within a very small amount of story. And I don't mean "and". I mean descriptive words.Also, the character interactions are clunky, awkward and not at all natural. I'll soldier on though.