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The preface had vague language, specifically it & that, that I had no idea what the character was referring to & had to stop & reread to understand what the hell was going on. Additionally, the preface while it let me know the main character was in a tight spot, I didn't have a name for her, only a physical description. Then the next page started Chapter 1, which didn't tell me if I went to the future or past.
— Dec 15, 2018 04:38PM
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Melissa
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Suspension of disbelief snapped when the main character, who has isolated with her husband prince that she's known all of a few days, says that he knows exactly what the main character is thinking. Please ignore the fact that the she & the prince come from different backgrounds & life styles, apparently he's a mind reader.
While the situation is interesting, not sure about the story as a whole.
— Dec 16, 2018 05:00PM
While the situation is interesting, not sure about the story as a whole.
