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I am not loving this at all. No real world building, characters are SO two dimensional (no real back story to get in their heads), and the damn grammatical errors are killing! Did she not have anyone read this beforehand? There are words used incorrectly and names used when it should be a different character. One minute it’s Ethan and the next it’s Simon though Simon isn’t there. Really annoying. Get an f-ing editor
— Dec 17, 2018 06:17PM
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