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Hmm, some technical errors so far. Concept is interesting enough, but the first person narrative slows down the pacing a lot. I'm not sure how I feel about throwing in the word "retarded" in the story, since it's an outdated term, and also out of context.
— Dec 20, 2018 04:51PM
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Lily Vagabond
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Well, that was a blood-soaked dark chapter, and perfect. On to the next...
— Dec 21, 2018 07:17PM
Lily Vagabond
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This is starting to feel a little bait and switch-y.
— Dec 20, 2018 05:51PM
