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John
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Things have picked up & there's some characterization to build upon, but you still don't feel connected to any of it. Like the spirits in the story, you're detached & disconnected from it all.
— Dec 27, 2018 04:44PM
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John
is on page 184 of 432
Decent attempts at weaving plot points & background info into the narrative don't offset the asspulls being thrown at you, adding confusion to a plodding tale.
— Dec 27, 2018 06:59PM
John
is on page 76 of 432
Still not feeling any real connection to anyone or anything. It all feels like caricatures and sets being pushed in front of us- telling, not showing. Also not very interesting.
— Dec 27, 2018 02:21PM
John
is on page 34 of 432
Ellandaise... is that anything like Bernaise? It's the world for English/European in this book. So far a bit confusing and kinda preachy. Trying too hard to pose Lu as the speshul princess.
— Dec 27, 2018 12:28PM
