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Really artificial dialogue and character thoughts. Too much tell, very little show. Annoying characters.
— Nov 24, 2012 01:17AM
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Stripper mermaids earn thousands of dollars nightly to buy weapons for their kingdom to use in war. Sooo much suspension of disbelief required here.
— Dec 01, 2012 02:22PM
