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Too many redundant metaphors and similes. The language is just not well used. The book seems to have unnecessary scenes where all the protagonist does is wander around and make random descriptions. Two pages of this fluff could be reduced to two sentences.

But so far the plot behind the scenes seem a little intriguing.
Jan 13, 2019 08:46PM
Lethal Acoustics


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