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It's strange this opens with a court hearing where the Hero doesn't want custody of the child (he's single and works long hours as sheriff) yet the judge gives him custody anyways. I feel like that doesn't happen but I could be wrong.
— Jan 27, 2019 01:26PM
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So the wishes of the mother were so important that the Hero became guardian of a child when he didn't feel capable of the job, but those same wishes mean nothing now that the grandparents the mother ran away from want custody...
— Jan 28, 2019 04:14PM
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The heroine's been working at summer schools since she was 15? As what? You need college credit hours to be a substitute teacher...
— Jan 27, 2019 11:14PM
