Lisa’s Reviews > Dawn Among the Stars > Status Update

So far it's not great. There are continuity errors (in one scene Kayin wakes up in a short sleeved dress, and then the next scene she's nervously fingering her blazer. Where did the blazer come from?). There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing overwhelming. The protagonist is very unlikeable, but at this point I haven't determined if that's how she's supposed to be (see: Don Draper).