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Cass
is 15% done
I picked this up again... And barely got through five pages. My problem this time is the lack of description. Why are reporters so bored with watching a woman's body walk around controlled by AI but clap thunderously to a virtual slingshot. I have no idea.
— Dec 15, 2012 03:08AM
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Cass
is 10% done
This book needs an editor. "arriving in the kitchen" when simply "in the kitchen" would have done. "spooning oatmeal rhythmically into my mouth". Really too many useless words.
— Sep 13, 2012 04:11AM