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Meran Rhodes
Meran Rhodes is 40% done
Oh what the hell; if she fires me she fires me.

What? Artie barley knows the guy and that's good reaction when he's living job to job and sort of supporting his family? Really?
Feb 11, 2019 07:19AM
Love You So Special (Love You So Stories, #3)

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Meran Rhodes
Meran Rhodes is 60% done
Wait! Is getting buried alive in sand a thing for California teens? Before even fit explaining Artie seemed to know where the story was headed and how the heck did Francois know the gold was for him as soon as he saw it? What am I missing?
Feb 11, 2019 08:06AM
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Meran Rhodes
Meran Rhodes is 54% done
The conversation in the dressing room after the concert is ridiculous. Only straight men can be macho and alpha? Does this author think every out gay man is a willowy, neurotic, anxious ridden twink? How did this book get such high reviews?
Feb 11, 2019 07:56AM
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Meran Rhodes
Meran Rhodes is 54% done
Do Francois kisses Artie for lock but gets upset when Artie kisses him for real because he must be homo curious? Come on!
Feb 11, 2019 07:49AM
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Meran Rhodes
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These characters would have been much more believable if they were a lot younger. If Artie had been written as a kid who was working with his dad's contracting business and Francois as a teenage genius their mindsets and behavior whole have felt more realistic and natural.
Feb 11, 2019 07:33AM
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Meran Rhodes
Meran Rhodes is 40% done
Francois is an obnoxious whiny baby. There is a way to do overwrought and distressed without making the character sound like a tantrum throwing toddler.
Feb 11, 2019 07:14AM
Love You So Special (Love You So Stories, #3)


Meran Rhodes
Meran Rhodes is 32% done
If Francois has that kind of social anxiety he would never suggest going to a restaurant.
Feb 11, 2019 06:53AM
Love You So Special (Love You So Stories, #3)


Meran Rhodes
Meran Rhodes is 30% done
The amount of times she uses real on Artie's side of descriptions is getting real old
Feb 11, 2019 06:37AM
Love You So Special (Love You So Stories, #3)


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