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Pati
Pati is 32% done
Hmmm.... another woman we're supposed to know. Apparently this author doesn't realize that some of us don't read mf books.
Feb 12, 2019 07:29AM
Fighting Vegas (Las Vegas Nights 4)

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Pati
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Now a female client "is a sociopath".... SMH
Feb 12, 2019 02:39PM
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Pati
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And now another man referring to the actresses and models as, "bimbos". SMH...
Feb 12, 2019 07:25AM
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Pati
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Oh, now suddenly, when the author needs Randy to hear some harsh truths, Teo magically makes an appearance... apparently having been in the house this entire time. SMH... where in the hell is this authors support staff? Editors? Honest, Beta readers? Anyone?!
Feb 12, 2019 07:13AM
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Pati
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Jesus! Now the misogyny is really showing!! All if his dates are, "vapid women". 🤬
Feb 12, 2019 07:08AM
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Pati
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Odd that we've heard about Teo, his personal bodyguard, yet we haven't seen him once. Even though they've been traipsing all over Vegas! SMH.... These little details can make or break a story.
Feb 12, 2019 07:01AM
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Pati
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*sigh* Damn it, this started so well. Sadly, going down hill quickly. Now, of course, we have to have a catty, obsessive woman. SMH...
Feb 12, 2019 06:47AM
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Pati
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Again, WTF?! So apparently despite what we were told in the beginning, Cassie does know! SMH.... 😒
Feb 12, 2019 06:41AM
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Pati
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Well that's a major OOPS! At the beginning we're told that Cliff couldn't even tell his best friends.... Cassie being one of the two named... about Randy. Yet now, in Randy's POV, he's thinking about his bodyguard telling him that Cassie now hates him because Cliff won't come to Vegas, because of him. SMH...
Feb 12, 2019 06:15AM
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Pati
Pati is 4% done
Starting out wonderfully. I love Cliff's inner snark!
Feb 12, 2019 05:53AM
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