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It's easier to follow this time, but there are still some things that are a little too between-the-lines for me. Since the reader is absolutely inside of Juliette's head, it's hard for the 'I've thought this all along' passages to seem believable. I would have liked her lies to be lies more clearly. And it's hard to believe her when 'she can't even think' when she is thinking so many things. Makes it feel like a ploy