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OMG!!! More grammatical errors..... How in the hell did this get so many high ratings?!
— Feb 23, 2019 06:47PM
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Do your damn research! Hurricane Ivan was only a Cat 3! NOT A CAT 5!
Hurricane Charlie, while officially listed as a Cat 4, was indeed a Cat 5 when it tore through our area! Hurricane Charlie actually split North Captiva in half. I wish that authors would either take the time to research or keep things totally fictional! SMH
— Feb 23, 2019 06:59PM
Hurricane Charlie, while officially listed as a Cat 4, was indeed a Cat 5 when it tore through our area! Hurricane Charlie actually split North Captiva in half. I wish that authors would either take the time to research or keep things totally fictional! SMH
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Ah, shit! A fictional island off the coast of Sanibel?! Really?? This is taking place in my area?..... *sigh* And WTF are they talking about Ivan for?!?! Ivan wasn't bad in this area in 2004!! Charlie was the one that destroyed our area in 2004!! SMH.... Damn!
— Feb 23, 2019 06:53PM
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Well hell. SMH.... "if you hadn't have" ..... this needs a decent proofreader. This should be either 'if you hadn't' or 'if you wouldn't have' !
— Feb 23, 2019 06:44PM

